That last line could be read as describing the trees or the viewer, both interpretations are interesting. Also I love how you’ve used the word pose to describe the leaves. Great fall micro poem!
My first thought was how the leaves of different colors are each beautiful, without being envious of one another. They simply are. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. I value your perspective!
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That last line could be read as describing the trees or the viewer, both interpretations are interesting. Also I love how you’ve used the word pose to describe the leaves. Great fall micro poem!
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My first thought was how the leaves of different colors are each beautiful, without being envious of one another. They simply are. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. I value your perspective!
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That was my first thought too. 🙂
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definitely save this one David. Good insight.
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Thank you, Gary. I’m not sure how many haiku I’ve written, but it’s getting closer to book sized.
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