Categories Haiku summer Anticipation Post author By davidsdailydose Post date May 12, 2024 9 Comments on Anticipation Photo by Betty Chambers, from chambersontheroad.com a snail climbs a rail it took her over an hour once at the top: “Whee!” Share this: Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Like Loading... Tags anticipation, Haiku, micro poem, micro poetry, summer poem By davidsdailydose I'm just a regular guy who was tempted to lose all hope but did not. It was God who made the difference. View Archive → ← Programed → Mayday 9 replies on “Anticipation” Betty got a good picture there….nice play on snails pace with your haiku. LikeLiked by 2 people Yes she did! As I recall, it was taken with her phone, on the macro setting. Betty has a great eye for what makes a great photo. LikeLike Snail climbs up to see Up close, she’s not so slimy Both see the beauty LikeLiked by 1 person ❤️ I thought about her topping the hand rail and seeing that tree from a new window. Well done, Betty, and a great photo! LikeLiked by 1 person Thanks, David! Hope you have a good day! LikeLiked by 1 person You too, Betty! LikeLiked by 1 person This is a fun haiku. I love it paired with the photo. Both wonderful! LikeLiked by 1 person Thank you. I wanted to pull in the snail 🐌 seeing the tree, but didn’t have enough syllables. LikeLiked by 1 person Ah, the struggles of a haiku! LikeLiked by 1 person Comments are closed.
Yes she did! As I recall, it was taken with her phone, on the macro setting. Betty has a great eye for what makes a great photo. LikeLike
❤️ I thought about her topping the hand rail and seeing that tree from a new window. Well done, Betty, and a great photo! LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you. I wanted to pull in the snail 🐌 seeing the tree, but didn’t have enough syllables. LikeLiked by 1 person
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Betty got a good picture there….nice play on snails pace with your haiku.
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Yes she did! As I recall, it was taken with her phone, on the macro setting. Betty has a great eye for what makes a great photo.
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Snail climbs up to see
Up close, she’s not so slimy
Both see the beauty
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❤️ I thought about her topping the hand rail and seeing that tree from a new window. Well done, Betty, and a great photo!
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Thanks, David! Hope you have a good day!
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You too, Betty!
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This is a fun haiku. I love it paired with the photo. Both wonderful!
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Thank you. I wanted to pull in the snail 🐌 seeing the tree, but didn’t have enough syllables.
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Ah, the struggles of a haiku!
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