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Anticipation

Photo by Betty Chambers, from chambersontheroad.com

a snail climbs a rail

it took her over an hour

once at the top: “Whee!”

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9 responses to “Anticipation”

  1. Gary Fultz Avatar
    Gary Fultz

    Betty got a good picture there….nice play on snails pace with your haiku.

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    1. davidsdailydose Avatar
      davidsdailydose

      Yes she did! As I recall, it was taken with her phone, on the macro setting. Betty has a great eye for what makes a great photo.

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  2. Betty Avatar
    Betty

    Snail climbs up to see
    Up close, she’s not so slimy
    Both see the beauty

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    1. davidsdailydose Avatar
      davidsdailydose

      ❤️ I thought about her topping the hand rail and seeing that tree from a new window. Well done, Betty, and a great photo!

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      1. Betty Avatar
        Betty

        Thanks, David! Hope you have a good day!

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      2. davidsdailydose Avatar
        davidsdailydose

        You too, Betty!

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  3. FlowIntoWords Avatar
    FlowIntoWords

    This is a fun haiku. I love it paired with the photo. Both wonderful!

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    1. davidsdailydose Avatar
      davidsdailydose

      Thank you. I wanted to pull in the snail 🐌 seeing the tree, but didn’t have enough syllables.

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      1. FlowIntoWords Avatar
        FlowIntoWords

        Ah, the struggles of a haiku!

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