I think that writing haiku takes a fair bit of skill and talent and, as you say, the last line is a clincher.
I’ve seen more of Gary’s photos on his photo website (Unsplash?) – they’re excellent.
I do love that picture David, It’s taken from my back deck, and you hit the last line out of the park, “delicacy dazed”
It seemed like the whole woods was dazed with two seasons overlapping so much. When the snow melted and fell off it took most of the leaves with it.
[…] does all the hard work in that collaboration. You must browse a bunch of them starting with todays (All Haiku click here) David may someday have a coffee table book with my pictures… that would be […]
Comments
7 responses to “Snow on Leaves”
I particularly like that last line – ‘delicacy dazed’.
Lovely photo too.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you, Lesley. The juxtaposition at the end is often the hardest line to write. My friend Gary, from Northern Minnesota, took the stellar photo.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I think that writing haiku takes a fair bit of skill and talent and, as you say, the last line is a clincher.
I’ve seen more of Gary’s photos on his photo website (Unsplash?) – they’re excellent.
LikeLiked by 2 people
I do love that picture David, It’s taken from my back deck, and you hit the last line out of the park, “delicacy dazed”
It seemed like the whole woods was dazed with two seasons overlapping so much. When the snow melted and fell off it took most of the leaves with it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
A few commenters have mentioned your wonderful photos. I make sure they know where they came from. I enjoy our collaboration, Gary!
LikeLiked by 1 person
[…] does all the hard work in that collaboration. You must browse a bunch of them starting with todays (All Haiku click here) David may someday have a coffee table book with my pictures… that would be […]
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for the link, Gary. God Bless!
LikeLiked by 1 person