How fun! Your haiku tells starts a story and leaves so much to my imagination. It also inspired me to write my first haiku with a photo instead of a song attached. https://lousyhaiku.blog/2023/07/30/lousy-haiku-122/
Love the lighthouse grin!! Fun. Bike on the rocks picture kicks in the imagination and brings to mind my bike stories as a kid, always riding to the water.
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How fun! Your haiku tells starts a story and leaves so much to my imagination. It also inspired me to write my first haiku with a photo instead of a song attached. https://lousyhaiku.blog/2023/07/30/lousy-haiku-122/
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Thank you, Majik. I like to leave room for the reader. Your haiku is excellent!
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Thank you, David. That’s high praise from a master. I wish I had proofed my comment before sending it. My coffee hadn’t kicked in yet!
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Love the lighthouse grin!! Fun. Bike on the rocks picture kicks in the imagination and brings to mind my bike stories as a kid, always riding to the water.
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I love the lighthouse grin, too. I think the lighthouses are thinking, “those crazy kids.” Thanks for your haiku, David!
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