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Low Canopy

Clouds, close to the ground

Covering the empty trees

with an eerie mist.

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5 responses to “Low Canopy”

  1. Kate McCormick Avatar
    Kate McCormick

    And I see you also write poetry.
    The featured image pairs well with your atmospheric haiku, which, to me, evokes a late-fall morning. Well done.

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      davidsdailydose

      It was a late fall morning, last week, that inspired this haiku. Thank you for reading and commenting on my Haiku. I write mostly traditional 5-7-5 form.

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        Kate McCormick

        Me also.

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    God Still Speaks

    We get the eerie mist here at the ranch in the morning, that comes from the reservoir nearby, until it freezes over in winter. It is lovely, and then the little glimmers that look like diamonds just add to it.

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      davidsdailydose

      We don’t get the diamond glimmers very often here, but I know what they look like. My wife used to live in Alaska, where they had freezing fog!

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